Age/Gender: n/a, Female
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 330 / 400
Exp. Rank #: 112,436
Voting Pow.: 4.66 votes
BBS Posts: 1 (0 per day)
Flash Reviews: 4
Music Reviews: 5
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
Latest Flash Reviews
4 Reviews | 0 w/ Responses
I don't feel as if I can critique much, because I'm very much in the same rut of needing advice as you. (It's a school thing, however, so I doubt I'm allowed to post it online)
To me, it seemed to end a bit too abruptly - like it was lacking resolution. However, the ending does work in the 'sudden' sense as well. You may want to put in a bit more frames in your movements, as godforsakenly tedious as that is.
But... yeah, I really don't think I can critique you, other than say that this was a lovely little flash (with an awesome concept) to watch that probably took you a great deal of effort.
Great job, and good luck! :)
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Oh, dear. Hooray for violence? (logically, that probably should have happened. XP)
Still got a good laugh out of it. Good job
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
That was gorgeous. Awesome. Whatever. It's a pity that it went out of synch quite a few times, but the smooth animation and beautiful images that matched the song itself kinda weighed it out.
In any case, a job well done to all of you. (And sorry for commenting on a piece that's ages old. :P )
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Latest Audio Reviews
The wind and chime makes this quite a haunting piece. It would be great for level music in the game itself. Goes on for a bit. A good piece - but some parts could be varied a little, unless you want to keep the scenario as an empty, post-apocalyptic wasteland - which, by all means, is established instantly.
Great job. ^^
Author's Response:
yes thats what I wanted to keep it as :)
this is a personaly fave of mine :)
thanks for the review!
-shawn-
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Not bad - nice attempt at getting a metal remix going. :) Everything seems to drag quite a bit, though - a lot more energy could be put into it. (The beginning was a bit too droney-sounding)
Otherwise, keep polishing this and I think you'll have something a lot more special on your hands.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Try proving to me that you did this remix. Because this, if anything, is way too similar to the game OST.
At least you're providing downloads for people who are looking for this song, but post up your own work, next time. Then perhaps you'll gain some more recognition.
Author's Response:
ABUSIVE REVIEW
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.