Score: 9

"Very well done."

submission: The Paper Prince

date: May 23, 2009

I don't feel as if I can critique much, because I'm very much in the same rut of needing advice as you. (It's a school thing, however, so I doubt I'm allowed to post it online)

To me, it seemed to end a bit too abruptly - like it was lacking resolution. However, the ending does work in the 'sudden' sense as well. You may want to put in a bit more frames in your movements, as godforsakenly tedious as that is.

But... yeah, I really don't think I can critique you, other than say that this was a lovely little flash (with an awesome concept) to watch that probably took you a great deal of effort.

Great job, and good luck! :)

Score: 9

"Hurr."

submission: Pokemon: The Lost Ending

date: May 9, 2009

Oh, dear. Hooray for violence? (logically, that probably should have happened. XP)

Still got a good laugh out of it. Good job

Score: 9

"Dude."

submission: Bittersweet Symphony: SE

date: April 26, 2009

That was gorgeous. Awesome. Whatever. It's a pity that it went out of synch quite a few times, but the smooth animation and beautiful images that matched the song itself kinda weighed it out.

In any case, a job well done to all of you. (And sorry for commenting on a piece that's ages old. :P )

Score: 10

"I thought this would be a bit of a sellout..."

submission: Charlie the Unicorn 3

date: April 26, 2009

... but you proved me absolutely wrong. You keep surprising/grossing out/amusing the audience. I don't know how, but you do. XP (And compose a song for each ending. Wow.)

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"I REALLY LOVE YOU!!" D: